tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post6896685211559890515..comments2024-03-23T08:46:31.769-04:00Comments on Fair View: Friday Fantasy - Part 17, Ecudorian EquinoxSuehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09787091044579213649noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-58182856540580195312008-01-15T11:37:00.000-05:002008-01-15T11:37:00.000-05:00woah! i wish my baths ended like that!woah! i wish my baths ended like that!about a boyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16309142392823897238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-17466391581859450962008-01-12T12:13:00.000-05:002008-01-12T12:13:00.000-05:00All I meant by my initial remark was that if this ...All I meant by my initial remark was that if this were not rollicking good fiction (which I realize it is)and if Butterfly were my friend (which I realize he isn't) I would question why Butterfly would continue to succumb to a guy who makes him feel so frustrated and afraid (afraid for his life, apparently, in the last scene) especially when there are a gaggle of other seemingly more available guys around him. Austin has acted like an ass, regardless of his excuses (his inner dialogue was more than a little demeaning to Butterfly in the last scene---which is not to say that as a fiction it wasn't a great read; it's actually perfect for Austin's disgusting character) and Butterfly deserves better (if he were real).<BR/><BR/>Having said that, the assholery of Austin probably makes for better erotic fiction than a happy stable relationship, so while in life I would question the choice, in fiction I find it captivating.Doughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13609971299773817212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-19058698794196990082008-01-12T12:10:00.000-05:002008-01-12T12:10:00.000-05:00That is what the fantasy is all about Laurie!!! En...That is what the fantasy is all about Laurie!!! Enjoy!Suehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787091044579213649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-34774505130743697122008-01-12T10:35:00.000-05:002008-01-12T10:35:00.000-05:00I'm fantasizing about the firstthree guys-and the ...I'm fantasizing about the first<BR/>three guys-and the bed. They are <BR/>some eye-candy.Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01645677037265997958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-19245756409875966012008-01-12T08:28:00.000-05:002008-01-12T08:28:00.000-05:00Austin is upset because his sexual identity is in ...Austin is upset because his sexual identity is in the midst of change. He might get over it. Give him time.Suehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787091044579213649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-9985258848825369772008-01-12T02:18:00.000-05:002008-01-12T02:18:00.000-05:00Doug, if you have followed Butterfly around on his...Doug, if you have followed Butterfly around on his adventures then you should know he's like a sailor. In every port there's another...<BR/><BR/>Sometimes you've to give and other times you've to take.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-41034047531086063082008-01-11T21:16:00.000-05:002008-01-11T21:16:00.000-05:00Austin's a narcissist and creepy, seems more inter...Austin's a narcissist and creepy, seems more interested in his own power and reputation than in Butterfly. Of course Butterfly seems attracted to him regardless of the crappy way he's been treated, so I guess maybe he thinks he can't do better, or else the pleasure of the sex outweighed the assholery he has to put up with. Or am I misreading this whole relationship?Doughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13609971299773817212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-74482966547388365092008-01-11T20:06:00.000-05:002008-01-11T20:06:00.000-05:00Really Doug? Do share your thoughts.Really Doug? Do share your thoughts.Suehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787091044579213649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-73911963178427076192008-01-11T18:55:00.000-05:002008-01-11T18:55:00.000-05:00I still think Butterfly can do better than Austin....I still think Butterfly can do better than Austin.Doughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13609971299773817212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-43650573779010500862008-01-11T17:48:00.000-05:002008-01-11T17:48:00.000-05:00Thanks everybody. I kind of knew that was coming b...Thanks everybody. I kind of knew that was coming but the story develops as I write it. I wanted a character to deal with becoming gay, and Austin was in the right place at the right time. I'm afraid Jose IS wishful thinking Peter. His little mushroom headed cock is going to have to stay in our dreams and belong to Trella (lucky girl!).Suehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787091044579213649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-26713601539182205832008-01-11T17:22:00.000-05:002008-01-11T17:22:00.000-05:00Sue, that was fuckin' great! You know how you can ...Sue, that was fuckin' great! You know how you can turn us on.<BR/><BR/>We only need a good bye fuck between Mr. B. and José... or is that wishful thinking?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-74154628717747172342008-01-11T11:18:00.000-05:002008-01-11T11:18:00.000-05:00what!!?? omg you can't just stop there! sdlfjljf t...what!!?? omg you can't just stop there! sdlfjljf that was great but damn. !! i love these friday stories :) perfect start to the weekend thank you!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23050840.post-63564116104606319082008-01-11T10:06:00.000-05:002008-01-11T10:06:00.000-05:00Thaaat wa WONDERFUL,Sue!I LOVE how the fight turne...Thaaat wa WONDERFUL,Sue!<BR/>I LOVE how the fight turned into a hot fucking!I was hoping to:)heheYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18412998053601555997noreply@blogger.com